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Sunday, September 25, 2011

The Fright Factory by William R Potter (Sample Sunday)

A 900 word excerpt of my new book,The Fright Factory.

(WARNING some coarse language remains in the sample)

Now available at Amazon.












Wesley saw motion from the corner of his eye.

Jesse wandered into the room. “Howzit going?” He had a length of chain and a padlock. He looped the chain between the two chairs, pulled up the slack, and then clicked in a lock. With a second length of chain he secured Wesley and Robin to the cast iron fireplace. Where Robin had been able to slide along the floor earlier, they were now secured in place.

Jesse showed them both a candle with a hole drilled through the middle near the base of the stick. He set the candle in a brass candle holder on the coffee table. He walked to the kitchen and returned in a few seconds with a long red stick, obviously dynamite. He used duct-tape to fasten two more sticks to the first and he set the three next to the candle. He then took a long string that looked like a fuse and threaded it through the hole in the candle.

Wesley wasn’t sure what Jesse was doing but he knew it wasn’t good. Jesse took the camera off his shoulder strap and began to film Wesley and Robin. Brandi entered the room with a long butane fireplace lighter. She wiggled her ass for the camera and licked the end of the starter seductively and then headed for the candle.

Oh shit, oh shit! Wesley began to understand what was about to happen. He tensed in his chair and glanced at Robin who appeared to know what was occurring as well.

“Wes?” Robin said in a low whisper.

Wesley watched as Brandi enacted a dramatic, slow motion lighting of the candle. The wick lit and then the flame increased. Jesse carefully moved the table a few feet closer to Wesley and Robin. Brandi stood back from the candle about the same distance as Wesley and blew a long, hard breath at it. The flame flickered and danced but remained lit.

“You all can huff and puff but I’d say you have about 20-30 minutes before those three sticks blow the roof off this sh**hole and you along with it.”

Both Jesse and Brandi turned and walked for the front door. Jesse stopped and then said, “Smile now. And please…please make this good! Huh?”

“Have fun,” Brandi giggled.

The flame continued its morbid dance as Jesse opened the door, Brandi followed, and both exited. Wesley watched the smoke of the flame and he could smell that the candle was scented with flowers.

“Wes! What are we going to do?” Robin was pulling on her tie-straps and kicking her feet. The chain made a metallic jingle. “Do something. Don’t just sit there!”

Wesley began to pull at the strapping with every ounce of strength. He pushed with his feet and tried to stand. Nothing. The candle continued to flicker as if mocking them. The scent was growing stronger as the flame grew taller.

Robin was gulping in long breaths and then exhaling as hard as she could. The flame shrank and twisted and then shot higher in the increased oxygen. She did the same maneuver again and again. “For f*** sakes, Wes, blow!”

Both were huffing, wheezing, and blowing and still the flame danced and flickered, and when they stopped the flame was taller.

“Okay,” Wesley said, winded. “On three, fill your lungs, and when I signal let’s blow together. Okay?”

Robin nodded.

“One-two-three.” They filled their lungs, held their breath, and looked into each other’s eyes. He gave a small nod and they both blew out as hard as they could. The flame burned away from their view as they exhaled, appearing as though it had been extinguished. Wesley felt a moment of triumph, however, as soon as their lungs emptied, the flame darted for the ceiling once more.

“F***!” Robin said between gasps. “All we’re doing is helping it to burn down faster.”

“I agree.”

For the next several minutes they struggled at their bonds. Faster, desperate movements. Robin was screaming and swearing and he could see tears streaming down her face. He looked at the candle and saw less than an inch of wax above the hole with the dynamite fuse. He began to feverishly kick his feet and tug his wrists hoping for a loosening or the break of a strap. Instead, the rear legs of the chair snapped, sending him over backwards, resulting in a loud crack when his skull met the wood floor.

He shook his head slightly and glanced up at Robin next to him. She was straining to see him as he fought to meet her eyes. He could not see her face.

“You—okay?”

“Um—think so.”

“Half an inch,” Robin said, in a small, childlike voice.

“I know.” They were both quiet for a few seconds. Wesley was able to move enough on the floor to see the candle. He couldn’t see Robin’s face or stand or break free of the chair but he could see that damned candle.

“I’m sorry,” Wesley said.

“Huh, why?”

“For bringing you here….”

“You only did because I was pressuring you for us to get away.”

“I love you, Robin. More than you know.”

“I do know, Wesley. I love you too…I’ve loved you my entire life….”

“I feel bad—for the kids. This will be hard for them….”

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Friday, March 25, 2011

Fling Friday for March 25

The Fling Friday Romance post is


Bent, Not Broken by William R. Potter






Fling Friday is the place for Romance Guest posts. IAN members are invited to send in their synopsis or review of romance books. Also Romantic Suspense, Paranormal Romance, Erotica, GBLT and all the other Romance sub-genres!

Thursday, February 3, 2011

Thomas Drinkard Interviews William R. Potter


This interview was previously published at Thomas Drinkard's bloghttp://brinson1.wordpress.com/










I’m happy to say that today’s interview will not only cover William’s writing, but will also focus on the Independent Author Network (IAN). I’ll let him explain.

T. Hello, please give us a bit of biography to start.

WRP. I live in New Westminster B.C. Canada with my wonderful wife; my son, Alex 7 and daughter, Meghan 5. I have self-published two books including my short story collection Lighting the Dark Side, which won an editors choice award in 2009.

T. When did you start writing?

WRP. I attempted my first novel at age 11 after watching the first King Kong remake in 1979. Later in my teens I would enjoy poetry and later short-stories before returning to pen my first novel in my late 30’s.

T. Was there a favorite writing teacher or mentor?

WRP. No, none that I recall.

T. With a family and full-time job when do you find time to write?

WRP. Whenever and wherever I can find a few minutes.

T. Please tell us about your current book.

WRP. My latest is called Dead of Knight. It’s a murder mystery thriller/police procedural. A synopsis: Believing he is a soldier of justice, a young man begins a callous campaign of terror, murdering women on their birthdays. Convinced of his righteousness, he continues his brutal crusade forcing the citizens of Hanson, B.C. to acknowledge a serial killer is active in their rural community. Anxious to work the biggest case of his career, Detective Jack Staal is forced to the outside when the Royal Canadian Mounted Police’s Integrated Homicide Teams are assigned to the case. Not one to sit on the sidelines, Staal convinces his colleagues to follow his lead and pursue a serial killer who the media has dubbed Birthday Boy. Dead of Knight is told from two perspectives, that of the cat, and the mouse, but who is who? Is the detective chasing the murderer, or is the murderer chasing the cop?

T. What was the inspiration for writing a mystery/crime thriller?

WRP. Writing and publishing a novel has been a life long dream. I made a few attempts at sci-fi novels in my teens and twenties without completing them. Some of my earliest television memories are of gritty 70’s cop shows like Starsky and Hutch, The Streets of San Francisco, and SWAT. As an adult, I couldn’t read fast enough the works of Michael Connelly, Patricia Cornwell and John Sanford. My first attempt in the genre was a Jack Staal short story. Readers and reviewers of Prominent Couple Slain enjoyed the piece and encouraged me to write a Staal novel.

T. What’s the significance of the book’s title?

WRP. The villain (Birthday Boy) calls himself Damian Knight…and therefore his victims are “Dead of Knight.”

T. What inspired you to craft the story from the perspective of both cop and killer?

WRP. Writing from both points of view allows me to put the reader into the head of a killer and not just the people who catch them. Getting deeper into the why and how a killer does what he or she does paints a stronger picture showing the two sides of a story. Plus it is a great deal of fun to write this way…today I’m the good guy…tomorrow not so much.

T. Is Detective Jack Staal based on a person or people you know in real life?

WRP. Staal isn’t based on real people. After thirty years of watching and reading in the police procedural genre, I have a clear picture in my mind of what I believe a homicide cop is. So many cop characters have a bullet proof, unflinching style. I wanted Jack Staal to be tough but realistic. Staal gets the job done but takes a beating physically and mentally, as I real detectives on the job do everyday.

T. Likewise, who/what inspired the “Birthday Boy” killer?

WRP. Birthday boy was inspired by a teenager in my high school in the mid 1980’s. Like Birthday Boy, he was bullied and teased relentlessly. I remember thinking all those years ago…what if this kid comes back some day looking for vengeance…what if he kills all these bullies? Hmm….

T. Do you have a sequel or prequel in mind or in progress?

WRP. I have a stand alone novel coming out this year and two sequels of Dead of Knight in the works.

T. What are your ideas about the future of digital publishing?

WRP. Print publishing is like vinyl LP’s just before cassette tapes and later CD’s took over the recording industry. New e-book formats will continue to improve the e-book reading experience leaving print extinct by 2020.

T. You founded the Independent Author Network. What is IAN and why start up a book promotion website?

WRP. The Independent Author Network is a group of like-minded authors who are self-published or published by a small indie press. The group uses social networking sites like Twitter and Facebook to promote authors as a group. After looking for an affordable and effective book promotion site for 3 years and finding none that truly offered value and increased exposure I came up with the basics of IAN and began to mention the idea to my author friends.

T. Does IAN work?

WRP. I think so. Members can directly affect the traffic to their IAN member page by tweeting and facebooking the page daily. This sends a great deal of traffic to all the membership. Those who are active are seeing over 1200 hits to their IAN page per month. Also, IAN pages are showing up on the first page of Google and Yahoo searches. Members are selling signed copies on their page and seeing increased traffic to their personal website and blogs.

T. Back to your writing. Do you ever suffer from writer’s block?

WRP. No, quite the opposite. I have too may ideas and not enough time to work on new projects.

T. Do you mainly write by day or by night?

WRP. I do the majority of my writing on Saturday and Sunday between 5 and 9 A.M. I get up at 4:30 in the morning most weekends and fuel myself with gallons of coffee and then type away on my laptop until the kids wake up three or four hours later. I have a fulltime job and throw in two kids under eight and you can see how my writing time is very limited.

T. Thank you.

WRP. Thank you for having me on your blog.



Sunday, December 5, 2010

Book Review: Dead of Knight by William R. Potter


Dead of Knight: A Jack Staal Mystery

William R. Potter

RealTime Publishing (2009)

ISBN 9781849610261

Reviewed by Charline Ratcliff for RebeccasReads (11/10)


I was recently asked if I would be interested in reviewing “Dead of Knight” by author William R. Potter. This book falls into the murder/mystery category and while it’s not my usual reading genre I agreed to review it. I’m glad I did because it was a great book.


The story location for “Dead of Knight” is Canada which, for me, was a really nice change. The book’s premise is this: A delusional young man believing himself to be a “soldier of justice” starts what he feels is a righteous crusade of cleansing. His victims are handpicked and meticulously stalked in order to learn their daily habits until he finally slaughters them on their birthday. I, for one, will pass on that birthday surprise thank you very much… Because of this killer’s gruesome practices the media has nicknamed him “Birthday Boy.” This nickname doesn’t sit too well with him - he wants to be taken seriously but…what’s a serial killer to do? And of course no tale featuring a heinous villain would be truly complete without an equally good counterpart trying to bring the evildoer to justice. Meet Detective Jack Staal who is assigned to this gruesome case. Jack is understandably horrified at the trail of bodies “Birthday Boy” leaves in his wake and he is determined to put an end to his reign of terror. Consequently Jack Staal will stop at almost nothing in order to apprehend this psychopath.


I’m happy to say I found “Dead of Knight” to be a fantastic read. Potter possesses great writing skills; he is appropriately descriptive and the story flows smoothly. “Dead of Knight” was suspenseful and I would agree with the back jacket’s statement that “Dead of Knight” is a cat and mouse thriller sure to delight fans…” I also appreciated that “Dead of Knight” wasn’t too easy to figure out and I admired the various plot twists that the author skillfully threw in here and there.


In summary I give “Dead of Knight” a five-star Amazon rating. It’s a riveting read but it is definitely aimed for mature readers..


William R. Potter's page at The Independent Author Network