Saturday, January 21, 2012

A Roadmap For Self-Publishing by John E. Nevola Author of The Last Jump - A Novel of World War II

So you're done with your manuscript and perhaps even tried to get an agent or publisher to read your work to no avail.  And now you've decided to self-publish and are wondering what pitfalls await you and perhaps how you might do this without having to pawn your engagement ring or your Mickey Mantle rookie card.

This roadmap will help guide you through the minefield based on my hard-learned lessons in self-publishing The Last Jump.  It is by no means a comprehensive "cook book" for self-publishing and its certainly not a "Self-Publishing for Dummies" style article.  It simply points out where I stepped on a land mine and what I will or will not be doing the second time around.  I'll provide some references at the end of the article should you choose to delve into the life of an indie author and the art of self-publishing more deeply.

Let's get started.

Mistake number one for me was assuming a bigger book would provide a greater value for my readers.  The fact that it would be more expensive to produce (and thus carry a more expensive cover price) eluded me.  I was compelled to reduce my manuscript by 20% to get the book into a reasonable price range.  As you know (or will find out), taking words OUT of your manuscript is the hardest thing you will ever have to do as an author.  In my case, it was a blessing in disguise as the reduction revisions tightened up the plot and improved the flow of the story.   But it took forever.  So try to keep it tight and do it right the first time.

If all you ever wanted out of life was to see your name on the cover of a book, then you can let Aunt Bertha edit your masterpiece.  But if you have any expectations of getting good reviews or perhaps getting mentioned in a book contest, you had better take the editing task more seriously.   This problem is unique to self-published authors as traditional publishing houses provide editing services for their writers.  So the final quality of your book is squarely on you.

Your worst enemy in this effort will be yourself as you become impatient to see your book published and tend to rush through this final but critical stage on getting your book out there.  Professional editing can be expensive but the final product will indeed make you proud.  And if you look hard enough, you may find people who discount their prices for any number of reasons (to get started in the business, a college student, a fellow member of the Military Writer's Society of America, etc.), which can save you some money when compared to "professional" book editors.  And since few or none guarantee their work, it may be worth a shot to take a chance on a hungry unknown.

What did I do, you ask?  I had six close relatives read and edit my book.  They found hundreds of errors in punctuation, grammar and spelling (spell check does not flag the correct spelling of a wrong word).  Then we published.  Some friends who read the book flagged another seventy errors.  The publisher required a hefty "reblocking" fee to make corrections after publishing.  We paid that fee and republished.  Then some other "friends" found another forty errors and we paid the fee once again.  I think we finally have a credible book on the market although my relatives are no longer considered "editors" nor are they even close anymore.

To avoid confusion, let's define how the term publisher is used in this article.

The traditional publisher dominated the field until just a few years ago.  They are extremely business oriented and therefore very selective in the manuscripts they choose.  They tend to favor established authors.  This is because they take all the risk as well as the lion's share of the profits.  Only they could afford to print ten thousand copies of a book at the same time to enjoy the economy of scale.  However, Print On Demand (POD) technology has altered the landscape.  An average size book can now be printed and bound along with its cover in about a minute.  Large print runs are no longer necessary to produce a cost-effective book.  If you're a client of one of these traditional publishing companies, you're in the wrong article.

Pure self-publishers do everything themselves including editing, formatting the book, cover design, printing, distribution, marketing and retail sales.  This requires great skill and an "insider's knowledge" of the industry.  This article is also not for you.

The third choice is the subsidy publisher, also known at one time as the vanity publisher.  These companies provide all the services of a traditional publisher for a fee.  They are capable of doing all of the specialized tasks required to build, print and distribute a book.  There are literally dozens of these companies and they all have different business models which translate into different pros and cons for the author.  The use of the term publisher in this article refers to the subsidy publisher.  So which one should you choose?

Books have been written on this topic and I will offer references at the end of this article for the ones I felt most helpful to me.  For now, I'll just point out the most important points to consider.

  • You want to retain all the worldwide rights to your work
  • The publisher should allow you reasonable options to price your own book
  • Cover art for the book cover should be included
  • They should be able to provide an eBook version in multiple formats

We'll talk a bit more about marketing later on but you should know your two biggest expenses will be your up-front publishing package fee and your editing services.  They all also try to hose you for as much "revenue" for marketing add-ons as they can squeeze out of you.

If you are solely publishing an e-Book, skip this section.  You already have total control over every element of your book from cover to format to pricing.  However, if you are also publishing a traditional book, hang in here.

Before your price is printed on the book cover, some publishers will offer a choice of what's called the retail discount.   Typically, they will let you choose some percentage between 20% and 40%.  This represents the percentage the bookstore can discount the book and still make a profit.  Therefore, the higher the discount, the higher the book must be priced.  And you will be told bookstores will not handle any book with a retail discount of less than 40%.  You will also be told you need to purchase a returns guarantee to cover the cost of unsold books.

Don't do it!

First of all, the publishing world is undergoing a huge metamorphosis driven by POD technology and the emergence of online eBooks.   Large publishing houses are losing their clout and bookstores are going out of business left and right.  What you need to do is take the lowest retail discount allowed to keep the price of your book as low as possible.  You're competing with other books and you want as much price advantage as you can get.  Don't be bullied into the larger retail discount just to be in bookstores.   Not being in traditional bookstores won't matter.  My book, The Last Jump - A Novel of World War II, is available online in hard and softcover versions as well as an e-Book.  Seventy-five percent of my sales are for the Amazon Kindle.  So, focus on getting (a) the lowest price and on (b) the online buyer.  You won't be sorry.

One final thought.  You can still get your book in local bookstores with a 20% retail discount.  Local bookstores may be interested in stocking your book, having book signings and capitalizing on the notoriety of a local author.  You just need to send out email queries and/or make some personal visits or phone calls to aggressively pursue this opportunity on a one-on-one basis.  Doing this I was able to place my book in the Army Heritage and Education Center bookstore in Carlisle, PA and the Toccoa Military Museum in Toccoa, GA.  Exactly the kind of bookstores I want to be in.

Finally!  Your book is published and available on and  Some of you may even have it available on  If you don't, you should.  Smashwords makes your eBook available in multiple formats compatible with Sony iPad, iPhone, Blackberry, Android, Palm and other e-readers.  The formatting requirements are stringent but the service is FREE!

But I digress.

When you are done making your title available, it's time to market your book.  There is "old" marketing (magazine ads, radio ads, personal appearances, etc.) and "new" marketing (Facebook, Twitter, etc.).   Some marketing approaches are expensive and some are free or cheap and the benefits do not always accrue to the more expensive (the saying "you get what you pay for" does not apply to marketing a book).

Here are some of my expenditures that yielded little return along with others that I rejected out of hand.

  • Banner Ads - in America in World War II magazine and in As A Mom's monthly eZine - MinuteMom. 
  • Web ads - in It is very difficult to gauge the effectiveness of magazine and web ads but I never saw that spike in sales that would justify the expense.  So, never again for me unless I get a great promo deal.
  • Paid for book reviews - Book reviews are important and you should get as many as you can but avoid wasteful ways of accomplishing this.  For example, don't mail books until you get an agreement from the other party they will do a review.  Send email queries instead until you get a response committing to a review.  Even then, you won't get them all back.  I also paid a small fee for a book review "service" who was supposed to hook me up with lots of reviewers.  I'm still waiting.
  • Book Contests - If you choose to enter any, contact the contest owner directly and do the work required to submit your entry.  Some publishers sell this as a "package" but it is nothing more than a rip-off.  They charge exorbitant prices to do the administrative work that you could easily do yourself. 
  • Press Releases - Some publishers try to sell a service that would send/fax the press release of your book to a million contacts.  (Well, maybe not a million but they exaggerate the number too).  Don't bother.  It's a waste of money.
  • Publicist - Some publishers try to sell a publicist services but their staff is typically not full time publicists.  This is one mistake I didn't make and I hope you don't either.
  • Promotional Materials - Some publishers try to sell a package of business cards, posters, magnets, bookmarks, T-shirts and all sorts of unnecessary junk.  The business cards are the only item that makes sense and could be acquired much more inexpensively via online vendors like Vistaprint.
  • eBook Formats - My publisher sells multiple packages designed to provide various e-Book formats for iPad, iPhone, Blackberry, Android etc.  Smashwords provides this service for free.  My publisher charges to provide a Nook book.  Barnes and Nobles provides this for free through their Pubit service.  My point is, do not bite on these packages from subsidy publishers until you adequately explore alternatives.  You will almost always find a less expensive option.
 FREE MARKETING (Or at least cheap)

  • Website - This is a must.  It's home base.  It's where you send everyone who shows the slightest interest in your book to get more information.  It's where outsiders can contact you for comments or get information.  You can link to your book's online product page directly from your site.  You can get a website for free from (some upgrades may cost a little money but the basic setup is free)
  • Facebook Page - This is also a must.  A Fan Page for your book to go along with your personal page will keep your book in the public eye.  Post frequent updates and expand your friend base in order to get your message "out there".  Sign up to join "groups" that share your passion for your book subject (whether it be romance, mystery, history, etc. there are likely to be more than a few groups who share your interest).  Post whatever updates you can to all of these group pages and your fan page as events transpire and things occur.  It's free.
  • Twitter/LinkedIn - Social networking is just beginning to shape the world of communication and marketing.  Getting in on Facebook and Twitter as well as LinkedIn is essential for the new author.  Joining them is free but learning how to use them efficiently will take some time.  But the effort will result in more free exposure than you could have ever hoped for.
  • Email Signature Line - Populate your email signature line with your book(s) names, awards, website, Facebook and Twitter addresses.  Every time you send or respond to an email, you will be promoting your book.  As you develop your persona as an author, along with your book title, your every-day interactions on the Internet will become a promotional vehicle for you and your book.
  • Media Coverage - Local radio stations and local newspapers often look for local content.  I was able to successfully obtain 3 radio interviews on a local radio station just by calling the station manager.  In addition, I had 4 articles in local newspapers published shortly after my book was published.  All I had to do to get these "Local Author Makes Good" pieces published was to email the newspaper editor.  However, even though I got these goodies for free, I'm still not at all sure how much of a positive impact they had on book sales.

  • Facebook Ads - I have had some great sales months in the last year and for the most part sales have grown quarter to quarter.  Since I've tried so many different things, it's impossible to determine precisely which efforts fueled my sales growth.  But one thing has remained constant throughout and that is my paid Facebook Ads.  So I'm staying with them.  If you decide to go with this I recommend you study the guide on Facebook.  Set your demographic and interest profile to reach at least 7 million people (more if possible).  Also, use the daily expense cap to limit your expenses.  Finally, I found paying for a thousand images more effective than paying for each click-through (to my website).  And I bid well below the Facebook recommended range.  (Facebook recommends I bid in the range of .42-.62 per thousand images but I bid .10 -.15 and usually hit my $2.00 daily cap every day).  I also suggest you keep track of your impression count, and expenses alongside your sales on a spreadsheet.  Change your ad content regularly and analyze sales within the same expense periods.  This should help determine which ads work better than others.
  • Business Cards - I found this to be a worthwhile investment.  When you meet new people or discuss your book with old friends, it's always helpful to leave them a card.  Make sure your website address is on the card.  I always carry a few cards in my wallet. When I go to well-traveled public places (doctor's office, automotive service, restaurants, etc) I always leave a small stack of cards.
  • Appearances - Most of my appearances are at military-friendly functions.  I attend as many re-reenactment events, reunions, air shows, recognition functions, etc. as I can schedule and drive to.  There you can meet people who share your interests, take pictures for your social media sites, pass out business cards and develop relationships.  The cost is in the travel expense including an occasional layover at a Motel 6.
  • Organizations - In order to stay in touch with like-minded people, you should bite the bullet and pay the dues to join organizations with people with similar interests, challenges and perhaps solutions.  Being continually "wired-in" keeps you engaged and in touch with the rapidly changing trends and technologies of  interest to the author.  The ones I recommend are the Independent Author Network, Goodreads and, of course, The Military Writers Society of America.
If you were able to secure a traditional publisher, all of these worries would be on someone else's desk.  But you decided to self-publish.  The upside is you have much more control over your writing adventure.  No one is telling you what to do, arranging your appearance and book-signing schedules or making decisions you might not agree with.  And you got your lifelong "dream book" on the market while you were still young enough to read it.

The downside is you'll be hard pressed to make great progress on that second book while you're functioning as the Marketing Executive of your own first book.  It is a demanding job with many false starts, dead-ends and dumb mistakes.  Hopefully this piece will help you prevent some of them and chart a course fraught with less danger.  Now you need to delve into the particulars and do the research necessary to utilize the tools available to you.

If you have anything you would like to add or discuss, just contact me on

All my best and good luck!

John E. Nevola - Author of The Last Jump - A Novel of World War II
See what I mean. J


The Independent Authors Network

The Fine Print of Self-Publishing, Fourth Edition - Everything You Need to Know About the Costs, Contracts, and Process of Self-Publishing - Mark Levine
This book will help you select a reputable publisher for your self-published book.  Available in paperback and Kindle

The First Ten Steps: Ten proven steps to build a solid foundation for your e-Book using free social networking - M.R Mathias
There are some interesting tidbits of information about social networking in this book.  Even if your book is available in hard or soft cover, these tips apply.  Besides, it will like be available in eBook form some day.

How I Sold 1 Million eBooks in 5 Months  - John Locke
This very popular book (see 225 reviews) provides much useful information for the indie author.  John Locke has good Internet karma.  We exchanged emails on a number of occasions as I asked him for clarification of some of his points.  This book is like panning for gold but the few nuggets in there are worth the effort.

Sunday, January 15, 2012

Paul Anthony: The IAN Interview

IAN. Hi Paul. Please tell us a bit about yourself.

PA. I’ve written a number of fictional novels and a poetry book and was first published in 1996 by a vanity publisher. It has been exceptionally successful for me over many years. I was in full time employment then and due to the nature of my employment, my employer preferred me  to use another name, so my first two Christian names were reversed and Paul Anthony was born. My next book was commissioned by a traditional house but they went into liquidation 6 months later and my venture recorded a nil return. When I recently retired from full time employment I adopted the independent route to publishing and self authorship. I’ve written television and film scripts either on my own, or with the award winning screenwriter, Nick Gordon who is my son in law. He won a screenplay competition hosted by Mark Cantor on behalf of Warner Bros. a couple of years ago. The son of a soldier, I settled in Carlisle before I joined the Police at the age of 19 and served throughout Cumbria. As a detective, I served with Cumbria CID, the Regional Crime Squad, Manchester, the Special Branch, the anti terrorist branch, and other national agencies in the UK. I have an Honours Degree in Economics and Social Sciences, a Diploma in Management and a Diploma in Office Management. I am the Chairman of a Registered Charity, 'Champ's Camp', and a supporter of the Dyslexia Foundation UK who recently selected 'The Fragile Peace' (my 1996 publication) to be the first book in their audio library. I am a keen promoter of 'A1 Casting North' which works with the 'Help for Heroes' Charity to provide job opportunities for ex military and ex police in the acting field, often providing both 'extras' and people with 'specific' military skills required by film and television production companies. I enjoy reading a wide range of works, reviewing same, and playing guitar badly. I also enjoy running, kettlebells, athletics, keeping fit, dining out and dining in, keeping Koi carp, and following politics, economics and social sciences. I’m married and have three adult children and five grandchildren. My adult children and wider family are all police and military figures.

IAN. Please tell us about your latest book.

PA. My latest book is entitled THE CONCHENTA CONUNDRUM. It’s set in the fictional town of Crillsea on the south coast of England. The book begins with two old friends reuniting. One is a former member of the Metropolitan Police Flying Squad (with whom I had a former connection) and the other is an army bomb disposal officer. The work opens with a bomb plot and the two men become instant heroes. But that all goes to hogwash when a number of unconnected murders are reported and the detective, Davies King, takes charge. He is thwarted by higher command at every turn and has to fight attempts to ridicule him every step of the way. Things are made worse when the bomb disposal officer, Max Fowler, is arrested and may..... or may not.... be the guilty party. As Davies King and his team dig deeply into the murders it becomes obvious that a web of corruption and power broking is in play and he needs to tackle it head on in order to win. How he tackles the case is the crux of the story. An unlikely character, Davies is a chessmaster, and runs his office from the local pub where a mix of characters, friends and suspects alike, weave through the work presenting themselves to the reader as a ‘goodie’or a ‘baddie’. It is the first of three ‘standalone’ Davies King books

IAN. How long did it take to write The Conchenta Conundrum?

PA. I crafted the book in Corralejo, Fuerteventura, during a fortnight’s holiday sitting by the pool in the sunshine with a glass of beer, a netbook, and my editor and first supporter.... My wife.

IAN. What inspired you to write the book?

PA. My first three books all centered around the detective, William Miller Boyd, (Billy Boyd) and tell the story of a Cumbrian detective who rises through the ranks into the Metropolitan police anti terrorist branch. His tales are of counter and anti terrorism, spies, bomb plots in Northern Ireland and the Middle East and the characters who make up the game. I was asked by a number of my friends and readers to write a murder mystery, mainly, I think, because I was involved in a lot of murder enquiries as a detective. So I decided to give it a go and wrote a fictional tale for readers to enjoy.

IAN. Talk about the writing process. Do you write at night or in the morning?

PA. I write when the mood takes me and at no set time. If I have a pen in my hand and I get a poem or a plot in my head, it’s on paper as soon as I sit down.

IAN. Did you use an outline or do you just wing the first draft?

PA. I write headings for chapters, For example, Chapter one - DK finds body Chapter Two - DK finds second body. Chapter Three - DK loses at chess to...?
and then build what is in my head into the book. My wife reads every 50 pages and corrects where needs be. Then we go back to the beginning. At the end I give the finished article to three friends who are all given specific editorial jobs with regards to the work. Then I take them out for a meal and a few glasses of wine. They’ve never let me down.

IAN. How is your book different from others in your genre?
PA. It’s not written as a police procedural. It’s written from first hand experience of the subject mixed with imagination.

IAN. Is The Conchenta Conundrum published in print, e-book or both?

PA. Both

IAN. What do you hope your readers come away with after reading The Conchenta Conundrum?

PA. I think pleasure more than anything.

IAN. Where can we go to buy your book?
PA. Amazon, Smashwords, Venture Book Galleries, and Lulu. All the direct links to my purchasing sites are on my IAN page and they are available in print and ebook formats.

IAN. Tell us about your next book or a work in progress. Is it a sequel or a stand alone?

PA. The next standalone Davies King book is entitled MOONLIGHT SHADOWS. The book was also crafted whilst on holiday. It is another murder mystery but this one is about ‘spies who fall out’. The reader knows who the murderer(s) is/are from an early stage. The mystery lies in why the murders are being committed. For what reason? The answer is offered to the reader at various stages of the work, but the real motive is the real mystery. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed writing this one in less than three months. The words have just flowed in but I will bury it for one month, re-read/write it, and then give it to my associate editorial team to edit. I have a number of author friends I am hoping will do me the honour of reviewing the work prior to publication.

IAN. Any other links or info you'd like to share?

PA. I have a blog page where I have a giggle at times and write about the distraught author Penelope Prudence and her adventures. I had to explain to someone recently that she is a fictional character and not a real person. I share information and tit bits on the publishing process for new authors here. And, I am really lucky, and feel quite privileged, to have hosted some guest blogs on the site from a good ‘mixed’ genre authorship of friends. Mainly IAN’ people like Nicholas Rose, John Betcher, Dennis Sheehan, Elizabeth Marshall, Zoe Saadia, CC Cole, Morgan Nyberg, Wayne Zurl, all good at what they write. And I’d like to draw attention to The Writers Collection website. This is a site where professional writers write short stories on a weekly basis for their readers. It has a massive following. I’m also a member of the Famous Five Plus group as well as having links on twitter, facebook and linkedin. My good news for 2012, apart from this wonderful IAN Featured Author accolade,  is that I have recently signed a distribution contract with Venture Galleries and I’m really looking forward to developing these relationships and delivering not just more work to the reader, but alternative methods of purchase in an ever-changing environment.  
These are my main active links

You can find excerpts from both my poetry book and The Conchenta Conundrum on my blogsite. I’m always popping in with poetry and odd paragraphs from different books I’ve written.

IAN. Anything else going on in your life?

PA. If anyone is interested in following up on The Fragile Peace, I’d like you to know that the contract is being terminated and there will be no further print runs. There are less than 50 left in the warehouse apparently. The good news is that the ebook of the same name is ready and I will be republishing it under my own imprint in print and ebook in the next month or so, and once the contract is formally concluded. So, if it’s not on your favourite website will be soon.

Sunday, January 8, 2012

Railroad Man by Southern Fiction Author Alle Wells

Rail Road Man is author Alle Wells second published book.

Mickey’s job with the railroad is the best gig going in north Georgia in 1933. He’s tall, dark, and handsome and has it made in the shade. Mickey found his true love at an early age and dreams of the perfect life they will share. He roams the speakeasies and clip joints of Atlanta, looking snazzy and ready for some action. The women call him Killer. He seeks the exotic creatures of the city and the wonders they hold. What Mick finds on a cold, dark night in a lowdown speakeasy changes his life forever. Forty-five years later, Mick wonders what happened.

Praise for Railroad Man:

I think that most people can relate to Railroad Man where life's dreams and disappointments meet somewhere in the middle. I highly recommend this book for any man who dreams of days gone by. Amazon Review.

This is a story of forbidden love in the 1930's. The conflict, drama, and surprising twists in this story held my interest. The characters are so real, I feel as if I know them. This fast moving, easy read held me tight until the end. Amazon Review.

The Author

Alle Wells writes Southern Fiction set in specific time periods. Genres may include Southern Fiction, Historical Fiction, Historical Romance, Contemporary Romance or Human Interest stories. Each book tells the story of one life and how society, beliefs, and culture shape the outcome of that life. The reader may find a family member, a friend, an acquaintance or themselves in her characters. Her stories are like life: funny, tragic, romantic, happy, and sad. Choose one of her titles and find yourself or someone you know.

Alle’s first book, Lame Excuses, tells the story of a young woman’s blissful love for food that leads her to a bitter end. This story addresses the crippling epidemic of food addiction in the rural South.

The new era of self-publishing opened the door for Alle to pursue the dream of sharing her stories with the world. Other interests include supporting other Indie Authors, reading, yoga, bird watching, healthy lifestyles, and a vegetarian diet. Alle lives in North Carolina.